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Thursday, September 9, 2010
WIP for August: Wrinkle in Time transformation quick test
This is coming along great. I absolutely adore the movement, especially how each pose is an opposite of the next, in terms of directional movement. It makes it wonderfully exciting, and really pushes the poses well! I'd say maybe hold the first frame a couple more, just to really get us used to a more static image before he starts transforming. Keep at it!! =D
The only thing i'd say, was watch your timing. Its nice how you hold a pose and switch quickly to the next, but i'm starting to sense a beat here. Like the time between each pose is spaced out in similar incriments. Try speeding up and slowing down how quickly you get from one key to the next, it will keep your viewers on their toes more.
but seriously audrey...thanks to you i'll have to run back downstairs to pick up my jaw. thanks -___-
This is coming along great. I absolutely adore the movement, especially how each pose is an opposite of the next, in terms of directional movement. It makes it wonderfully exciting, and really pushes the poses well! I'd say maybe hold the first frame a couple more, just to really get us used to a more static image before he starts transforming. Keep at it!! =D
ReplyDeleteWoah, first time threw, TOTALLY blew my mind!
ReplyDeleteThe only thing i'd say, was watch your timing. Its nice how you hold a pose and switch quickly to the next, but i'm starting to sense a beat here. Like the time between each pose is spaced out in similar incriments. Try speeding up and slowing down how quickly you get from one key to the next, it will keep your viewers on their toes more.
but seriously audrey...thanks to you i'll have to run back downstairs to pick up my jaw. thanks -___-