yet more space. yes, she has an ipad. sorry it's dark, my scanner was broken when i drew this, so i took a picture and coloured it afterward. space is ORANGE. why? you ask. well, i say, it's because the sun is coming! seriously, though...the ipad would rock in space.
I think this one is working well with creating interesting shapes and negative shapes to make an overall composition that is definately on the right track. =)
ReplyDeleteThe girl herself I feel needs to be pushed a little more to the right, and include her feet. in the shot. Feet a very difficult to draw, but it's still worth tackling them. I say move her to the right a bit, because her hair is touching the edge of the frame, and creating an uncomfortable tangent with it, as is the earth on the right hand side of the image. just a tad farther from an edge, or being pushed "beyond" the edge so the image appears to be cut off is better than butting up against the parameters of an image.
I guess I'm going piggy back off of vee and say that i would agree that the the figure needs to be in the frame completely, i would also try and actually make the figure a little smaller to make the space between whatever planet she is on and earth.
ReplyDeleteI would also add a bit of a gradient from black to orange to really give that "rising sun" feeling.
I really like where you're going! I think keep pushing the proverbial paint around and you're going to have something great.